What’s the Draw?

by Kym on May 26, 2009

In the increasingly long and drawn out saga of Kim-Trying-to-Figure-Out-how-to-Grow-as-a-Writer, there has been yet another epiphany/ah-ha! moment.

I decided to conduct an experiment. I selected a handful of books from my personal library, books that I tend to read over and over again. I picked up each in turn, read the first chapter, then put them down again. And then I waited. And waited. All the while feeling this gnawing in the pit of my stomach. An eagerness to get back to the stories I’d started reading.

Then began the pscyhoanalysis. What was the draw? Why did I want to pick it back up again? Why did I want to read this one more than that one? What, in essence, makes each of those books so compelling?

1) Ender’s Game. I read this book at least once a year and I never tire of it. As I mulled things over and realized that of all my choices this one called to me the most, it took me awhile to figure out why. Obviously, I know what happens. And while Ender is a very sympathy inducing main character, it wasn’t about him either. It was fascination with a set of circumstances so completely outside the realm of my experience. It was the world that Orson Scott Card created in that book that called to me. I wanted to immerse myself in it again, to feel that strange but somehow pleasing sense of displacement. For me, the draw is the setting.

2) Uglies. Scott Westerfeld also creates his own world in his series, Uglies, Pretties, and Specials. The draw for me personally though was the main character Tally. This book is written from inside her head to such a degree that you see and feel everything she does as you read. It’s indescribable, and in many ways addictive. So character. This is the main draw of this book, for me. Character.

3) Harry Potter. I wouldn’t have gone out of my way to add this to my experiment. I enjoy the series, but I’m not an ardent fan. Still, Neil was reading the last book again so I added it to my pile. Turns out the draw of the Harry Potter series for me is the plot. And the magic. I love how magic is interwoven into the plot. It’s fascinating and entertaining on a fairly simple level.

4) Mistborn, by Brandon Sanderson. Character, plot, and setting. All of the above, as it were. While all the books I feel compelled to read often naturally have a mixture of these elements, they tend to have one main one that stands out from the rest. Not so with Mistborn. For me, there’s no separating them out. Everything is too intricately woven together. In my mind, this is a mark of a masterpiece.

5) Anne of Green Gables. Warm fuzzies. That’s what this series is all about for me. It brings me joy. It makes me happier to live the life I’m living. Anne is a shining example of living life joyfully and reading her story makes me yearn to be more like her.

6) The Hitch-Hiker’s Guide to the Galaxy. As with Ender’s Game, fascination wins the day here. Adams’ delightful wit and zany humour just suck me right on in. It’s not about the plot, or the characters, or even the setting. It’s the writing. There are few writers who can pull this off, I think. It’s the sort of thing best not attempted. It takes a particular sort of genius or insanity.

And although I don’t own a copy, I can’t help mentioning Twilight. I kind of wince as I do, because I hate pandering to the “hot topic” of the day, but all throughout this experiment it kept popping into my head. I think I figured out one of the reasons I’m not a fan of this series. The characterization just didn’t grab me. The plot was fascinating and it was a very compelling read, but the characters didn’t come to life for me the way they do for many. Plot is a great draw, of course, but I’m realizing it’s nowhere near enough to add a book to my list of Must Reads. Let that be a lesson to me, yes?

Naturally, I can’t help taking a little time to wonder how to apply this to my own work. How can I write something that will be so compelling people will want to own their own copy and read it regularly? What elements do I need to weave into my own story so that it becomes more than just a story? So that it is something that lives and breathes and calls to its readers?

I haven’t the faintest idea. But I think I’m going to have fun, and frustration, trying to find out.

22 comments

I’m horrible, horrible, horrible with opening chs–I have to revise and change and begin somewhere else, and this is why–I have a hard time knowing how to draw in a reader. Great experiment!

(Just have to say the OSC bought my grammar book the other day. I feel so darn stinkin’ cool, even though I’m sure he did it just to be nice.)

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by Annette on May 26, 2009 at 9:02 am. #

I love Ender and Anne, too! I’ve never read Uglies…
But one of my favorites that you missed is Stargirl.

by JustRandi on May 26, 2009 at 10:17 am. #

What a great way to think about what interests you! I think this will help you in your writing endeavors.

P.S. I have only read a couple of these books, so now I have some new ones to put on my list.

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by Erin on May 26, 2009 at 11:03 am. #

It’s not the opening I ever have issues with… it’s the meat and potatoes I’ve got great ideas for the beginning and the ends :)

by Abra on May 26, 2009 at 11:19 am. #

This is exactly the kind of exercise that Barry Longyear recommends. When you figure out what draws you as a reader, you can improve your writing pretty significantly.

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by Novembrance on May 26, 2009 at 12:05 pm. #

This is a really interesting analysis Kym. I love it. It’s interesting how some things pop out to some people and not to others. See, with Twilight, the characters, plot and setting all hooked me and drew me into the story. Your prologue does it for me too :)

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by Jaina on May 26, 2009 at 1:51 pm. #

I agree with all of your choices except for Uglies and that’s only because I haven’t read it. YET. But I will. Anyway, with Ender’s Game, I think for me it’s about needing to know who’s talking, who they’re talking about, and needing to understand and have a context for that “displacement” you talked about.

by Your Name on May 26, 2009 at 2:26 pm. #

I’m YOUR NAME, btw.

by Melanie J on May 26, 2009 at 2:26 pm. #

“How can I write something that will be so compelling people will want to own their own copy and read it regularly?”

I say stop trying to write what you think will be compelling for others and write what IS compelling for you. It’s how I finally got my first novel out and whether or not I ever get it published, I’m happy with my story and characters!

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by Summer on May 26, 2009 at 3:33 pm. #

You are so smart, taking a look at this! And I’m FULLY confident that you’ll figure it all out. Just exactly right. And when you do, I won’t be able to put it down. True story :)

by Heather of the EO on May 26, 2009 at 5:10 pm. #

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by Why writing a complete story is so difficult for me | summersnook.com on May 26, 2009 at 5:13 pm. #

I will be so excited to read your book. I haven’t read all of the inspirations you listed, but I can see why they are so alluring. Best of luck as you plug away!

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by Kazzy on May 26, 2009 at 8:18 pm. #

Great thoughts! I’ve read many of these books and like them for the same reasons. As for “Twilight,” I read the series because I wanted to know what happened, but there was so much fluff that I probably won’t read them again.

One thing that turns me off a book is too much too soon. If an author introduces too many characters or too many new words or places in his or her universe, I’m out by the first chapter. Hook ‘em, ease ‘em in, THEN add more details.

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by Becky on May 26, 2009 at 8:38 pm. #

You didn’t list the author’s voice as a reason to read any of them. For me, that is a must. If I love the author’s voice, he/she could write about darning socks and I will be enthralled.

by Your Name on May 26, 2009 at 8:57 pm. #

Oops, it didn’t auto fill in my info–that was me in the last comment about the author’s voice.

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by Heidi Ashworth on May 26, 2009 at 8:59 pm. #

Great idea, this. I’ve been reading The Marshall Plan for Novel Writing and his approach is pretty similar. (Shh! Don’t tell anyone I’m writing anything more than my blog…)

xo

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by charrette on May 26, 2009 at 11:03 pm. #

Have you read Elantris by Brandon Sanderson? Just finished it and I liked it better than Mistborn! Maybe I’m weird…
It is interesting to see what books pull us in. There have been some that I wish I had never wasted the time to read. Then there are others that I could read over and over and over. I’ve never really thought about what it is that draws me to them… I’ll have to think about that. Perhaps it will give me some good insight into myself, eh? :)

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by Melissa on May 27, 2009 at 7:32 am. #

One of the writers that I keep going back to is Martine Leavitt. She is a Canadian from High River, Alberta. I love her book “Keturah and Lord Death”. In a way it is like reading poetry. She has such an incredible way with words. If you haven’t read anything by her yet, look her up. Another favorite of mine that she wrote is “Doll Mage.”

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by Cathy on May 27, 2009 at 8:35 am. #

This is a brilliant post. Now I’m trying to figure out what books I would read over and over. . .

Oh dear. I’m seriously in trouble.

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by Eowyn on May 28, 2009 at 5:43 am. #

I love this post! And strange how your Must Read’s coincide with some of mine! I think I’ll conduct the same experiment, too. Now just to figure out how to do it myself.

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by Jaime Theler on May 29, 2009 at 8:57 am. #

I think I shall have to try this. What a brilliant idea, Kim!

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by L.T. Elliot on May 29, 2009 at 1:47 pm. #

What an interesting experiment. It makes me want to do this sometime. No, I don’t want to write a book, but I am really curious as to what draws me in. I love to read anything and everything so I wonder if this will shed some light on the genres/styles I like the most.

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