Fiction Friday
by Kym on February 12, 2010
I haven’t written the intro yet but my work in progress is all about choices. You, the reader, get to make them. It’s rough. I haven’t included much description yet (I was having too much fun with the dialogue) and I think it’s missing a scene or two, but here is chapter one…
5 comments
As I noted on WIP, it’s terrific. Keep writing, and that’s an order.
I love this post’s image, too. You made my day with your sharing. Mwah, dahling.
by Luisa Perkins on February 12, 2010 at 12:21 pm. #
Exciting! You’ve done such a great job with the dialogue. Can’t wait to read more!
by Jaina on February 12, 2010 at 12:31 pm. #
I read your chapter. Nicely done. Zippy and fun. I am excited to read more as it comes.
by Kazzy on February 12, 2010 at 10:00 pm. #
What great voice there is in this piece! Well done, Kim!
by L.T. Elliot on February 18, 2010 at 11:46 am. #
In my opinion you will find there’s concern aided by the Rss in this case. Feels like some worn out connection to everybody?
by Paulette Delatte on June 20, 2011 at 5:45 am. #