I haven’t written the intro yet but my work in progress is all about choices. You, the reader, get to make them. It’s rough. I haven’t included much description yet (I was having too much fun with the dialogue) and I think it’s missing a scene or two, but here is chapter one…
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As I noted on WIP, it’s terrific. Keep writing, and that’s an order.
I love this post’s image, too. You made my day with your sharing. Mwah, dahling.
Exciting! You’ve done such a great job with the dialogue. Can’t wait to read more!
I read your chapter. Nicely done. Zippy and fun. I am excited to read more as it comes.
What great voice there is in this piece! Well done, Kim!